高考英语作文范例及指导
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例如: 黄浦区2012年高三英语二模作文:

你所在的社区正在征集以下三个志愿者服务项目的具体活动方案:

1)参与社区环保;

2)陪伴空巢老人(the elderly in empty nest);

3)组织读书活动。请你为其中的一个项目出谋划策。(文中请不要出现真实的社区名称、校名和人名。)

你的文章需包括以下内容:

介绍为该项目设计的2个具体活动; 简单陈述活动的意义。

作文指导:

从内容上说,本篇作文的重点在2个具体的活动,即"what to do"(做什么),而不是"why to do it"(为什么要去做)。

从结构上说,第一段是介绍事由,2-3句即可,

第二段是交待做些什么,5-6句,锁定"开展哪些活动",要用动词短语体现出具体的事情;

最后一段是简要交待活动的意义,3-4句;切不可从篇幅上超过第二段,否则结构失衡,产生内容上的分配不均,造成无谓的减分。

Example:

These days, our community is collecting ideas for the following three volunteer activities: protecting community environment, keeping company of the elderly in empty nest and organizing reading clubs. After careful consideration, I have worked out a detailed plan

for the second one.

(这一段在简单介绍事由。)

My plan consists of two practical ideas and both of them are easy to carry out. For example, every weekend, we canarrange forall the old in empty nest to go outing,witnessingthe ever-changing life andfeelingthe vigor of the city. During this period oftime, we candivide the old intodifferent groups according to their interests and hobbies, thus enabling those with a lot in common tochat with each other happily and leisurely. Another idea is that we canrecruit university students as volunteerstoaccompanythe old during festivals. Not only do theyhelp the old with the daily housework,they will act as attentive listeners, listening tothe old tell about their past experiences and life stories.

(这一段的黑体字都是一些动词短语,凸显了要做的事情,让别人对你设计的活动一目了然。注意时态是将来时,表明这是一个计划。)

The old have made great contributions to our society and worthy of ourrespect and care.My plan willenrich the life of the old and prevent them from feeling abandoned. Only when the old are better off living with the rest of the community,can our society be highly civilized and harmonious.

(意义分两步走: 1)对老人个人而言 2) 对整个社会的推动作用。所用的英文表达比较通俗通用, 可用于阐 很多活动的意义)

友情提示:

在写记叙文的活动时,不要套用和议论、说明文的格式, 如first, second, last but not least。 否则大有文体不对之嫌。 引出叙述,可启用for example, the first/next/last thing to consider is.

 

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